Your use of words : AMAZING! It's almost like poetry but you're telling a detailed story in only a few hundred words. I liked the peach sack part. I don't know why, I think because I didn't understand it at first but then I was like "Oh, they mean their skin...because they're white." I am so glad that comment swap brought me here and I have absolutely nothing negative to say here.
March 3rd, 2014 at 03:09am