Savage Hearts - Comments

just started reading this! its amazing!

aww that was probably the coolest proposal that anyone has ever come up with, loved it

I totally wasn't expecting that at all, but it was super sweet and I loved it.
She still has some rough edges but she clearly is unbelievable in love with Jon and that's all that matters.

Love these two, and Lila trying to shown Jon how to have a bit more fun. He loves her so much that he'd never do that, but it shows that they're young and are living life. Can't wait to see where this goes
Just a *small insignificant note* the sex scene was hot and playful (Jon love me!) but you said stiletto and wedge.

Woa it's been a while. But that update almost made up for it, or was long w. a little drama AND they had a pretty decent talk. She's right, she has been 'compromising' but what she doesn't understand is that he safety and wild nights shouldn't be considered something of a compromise. He doesn't want her doing those things because because he worries and Hershey can hurt her. Can't wait for the next chapter, these two have issues but they love each other and I wanna see what's up next in their lives ,

Pretty pretty pretty pleaseeeeee update!!

Love it!!!

WOO HOO NEW CHAPTER

Oh my goodness! I've finally gotten through the entire story and all I can say is wow. I'm completely blown away. The reason you have so many readers is not because it's another hockey fanfic but because the characters that you've created and the story that you've made is so captivating and much s'more original and well written than a lot of stories on here. I am HOOKED and I can't wait for more. I wish you could write my life LOL. Even the title is cool

update soon!

Ah! Keep it going! I wanna low what happens next!!!

great chapter, love your story! Can't wait to read the next one :)

thank you for updating, amazingly written chapter like always :)

Please tell me she just went for a long walk or something to get away from people watching and analyzing everything she doesand that she didn't leave. I mean if I went through something like that, I think I would need some time where no one was watching my every move and just have some time to myself.

Sounds like a miscarriage to me. Anyways, can't wait for the next update to actually find out what happened!

glad you updated. Cant wait for the next one.

I hope she did not have a miscarriage. I don't think I could handle that!

Love the update and I'm thinking a miscarriage. Update soon!

I'm thinking miscarriage. I hope she is okay

Yay!