I totally wasn't expecting that at all, but it was super sweet and I loved it. She still has some rough edges but she clearly is unbelievable in love with Jon and that's all that matters.
Love these two, and Lila trying to shown Jon how to have a bit more fun. He loves her so much that he'd never do that, but it shows that they're young and are living life. Can't wait to see where this goes Just a *small insignificant note* the sex scene was hot and playful (Jon love me!) but you said stiletto and wedge.
Woa it's been a while. But that update almost made up for it, or was long w. a little drama AND they had a pretty decent talk. She's right, she has been 'compromising' but what she doesn't understand is that he safety and wild nights shouldn't be considered something of a compromise. He doesn't want her doing those things because because he worries and Hershey can hurt her. Can't wait for the next chapter, these two have issues but they love each other and I wanna see what's up next in their lives ,
Oh my goodness! I've finally gotten through the entire story and all I can say is wow. I'm completely blown away. The reason you have so many readers is not because it's another hockey fanfic but because the characters that you've created and the story that you've made is so captivating and much s'more original and well written than a lot of stories on here. I am HOOKED and I can't wait for more. I wish you could write my life LOL. Even the title is cool
Please tell me she just went for a long walk or something to get away from people watching and analyzing everything she doesand that she didn't leave. I mean if I went through something like that, I think I would need some time where no one was watching my every move and just have some time to myself.