Suspenders, Stripes and Pain Killers, Oh My - Comments

Call me late, but I started reading this story just now in the morning and it was darn good, I just had to finish it on my way to work. And so I did.

I love tragedies and this is just the piece I'm looking for. It's pretty haunting as well, I must say. It didn't get me bawling like a baby though, but that didn't mean my heart's made of stone. I ended up depressed after reading this.

However, may I know what was Amber's intention in murdering Louis? I know that she might have slipped him the wrong prescription of drugs with all the commotion that was going on around her. And with Louis' condition, him being fragile and all, it wasn't that difficult to kill him. was she hiding something? Did she know the person whom Louis met that night at the cafeteria? Was she hiding his existence and since Lou knew about him, Amber decided to kill him off?

Oh God, the suspense is killing me! Too many emotions running through my mind now, urgh...

What. Why. Wwwwhy. No. You can't. You can't do that you just can't! YOU CAN'T. Oh my god that is pure torture. Why would she? Please dear lord, tell me YOU know why she did it. Please please. I can't live - exaggeration I know - without knowing! D':

WhAT OHMYGOD I KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO BE THE LAST CHAPTER BUT HOLY BALLS HE'S DEAD THAT ACTUALLY HURT. AND WHILE IT'S UPSETTING AND IT HURTS MY HEART AND I DON'T FULLY UNDERSTAND WHY AMBER DID IT, IT'S STILL KIND OF SATISFYING???? I DON'T KNOW BUT THIS WAS ALL SO EMOTIONAL FOR ME TO READ AND I'LL GO NOW OKAY.

Wait, what?! I'm confused!!

Wait, what?

Wait what I am so confused

My face really looked like this > :O OMG she killed him!!!! No!!! Why!?!

Sh-she killed him?!?!!
Oh my gosh Okay I didn't see that coming, but this was a great story to read it wasn't like the normal 'Lou I love you' type or even show how Louis is as a person. You had us readers view him in a different light. Great job on this story :)

WHAT THE HELL?! AMBOER LLOYD KILLED LOUIS TOMLINSON?!

I want to say that it's an unsatisfying ending, but it isn't. It's such a satisfying ending that I can't even think straight. It was a beautiful story with an even better ending. You did so well in this story and it's beautiful. I'm so glad I read this story :)

WHAT THE HELL?! i'm so confused D: aghhh. explain the story, explainn it. D:

asdfghjkl! amber? ohmygod :o i did not see that one coming! this was a good story :)

Okay so I didn't see THAT coming. Ugh poor b oo bear! My heart is breaking for him sigh. I love this so much and it just keeps getting better.

I'm crying :'(

wow multiple personality... didn't see that one coming.

o.o -refreshes. pauses. refreshes. pauses. refreshes....-

WHY do you do this?!?!
Poor Boo :(
Great chapter, I really wished that the chapters were long like had paragraphs? I can't even explain how shocked I mean wow....

Oh my gosh. Multiple Personality Disorder? Dissociative Identity Disorder? WHAT ON EARTH?! I can't. I can't right now. I don't know how to cope with this. I really can't understand why Amber didn't just tell him right away. I mean, I would have told him right away. Great job!

Awh, Louis! I can't believe his parents don't believe him :( That's harsh. Update, again?

Boom, called it! I had a feeling he made it up! Not on purpose of course, but still. Although, I do feel bad for him. Everyone's ganging up on him and he just needs support. Ugh poor Boo Bear. I hope you update again soon because I wanna know what Amber says!

Ahhh! NO, How could they do that. He needs all the support he can get, not accusations that he is faking it for attention!