Trying to Survive - Comments

Only 3 comments? I'm surprised 'cause your story is really good. While reading I noticed how much efford you put into it and so I had to review it.
I like your writing style and I like such stories, but they're really rare and always not much my style. One time I thought you made a mistake with the name, but that's just a little mistake.
I think the girls, Michelle and Lacey, are really ... uh how to say? Well I think they're not really pregnant or have to hide something big. I like the guys and as the huge Johnny fangirl I am, I wish he would get some more scenes.
But I do like the Zacky you created and Jimmy makes me smile as do Matt.
The last chapter was pretty sad, so I can't wait to know what'll happens next. Kepp going :)

i really like your stories please upload more

OkayOkay, yay for the update! The scene with Zacky was nice c: and now I'm sitting here in suspense waiting for the next part.

The description of the attack was really good and really set the mood for the story, I especially love how graphic it was. That's usually the best part. Aww, Val's pregnant! Her and Matt are going to make cute babies :D I live in the city next to Miami so, when it was pretty scary when that shit went down. Kanin sounds like a cool kitty. This guy with scars on his face, he creeps me out. Aw, poor Pinkly, she was left all alone :(

I was kind of pissed at Brian but, then I found out he was doing it for Michelle and their baby, and I'm less pissed. I hope Johnny is okay :(. I wasn't expecting Anabelle to be pregnant but, it was a nice suprise. Marty is a cute name for a puppy :). I don't really know what to think of these new people.

All in all, it's a really good story and I like to see where you plan on taking this :) I'm subscribing.