I really like how your explained the women's husband, and her buisness. One thing for sure is that you never actually explained what the mother looked like in like a very body figure same with Katrina and Bee. Which is a very weird name is it short for Beatrice? Jimmy, Katrina, and Kaity are pretty normal names. And personally I disliked the idea of the charaters using all capitals. And 6:34 AM is a very perfect time since schools usually start around 7:12 AM. This is seemingly the only chapter I have seen, and seeing from 3 years ago might make me skeptical that you are planning to continue it. I pretty much doubt you remember how the next goes.
May 2nd, 2016 at 05:15am