Look for You - Comments

Eep, I'm happy that she's not hating him anymore. This is getting interesting. a;sldkf asf ugh. update soon!

im interested in this so please update again soon and regularly too!!

So, Niall's girlfriend sounds pretty hot. XDXD hahahah.

i loved the update babe. I'm excited for the next chapter! Issy should just man up and give harry a chance!

I like this a lot. I super like how she treats him at the club :) update soon!

Good starting! Right into the action and drama of everything! Didn't even think it was about 1D until the very end. Even though I'm not a big fan of the band, this story seems pretty interesting!
The background does need does need some work though. Don't really fit, as of right now, and it's a bit tricky to read with it back there sometimes.
But great start so far!

It was a good story, I agree with the other poster about the layout not really fitting the romance spectrum, but you have a great writing style. As for one direction, haven’t heard of them, but for a fan fiction it is well written, so keep it up!

Yikes, something went wrong with Mibba last night and didn't show my whole comment. UGH, anyway....let me rephrase everything I just had said down there.

Yes, it is true, I do not like One Direction what so ever. I think it's the fact that people obsess over them more for their looks than their music which is perfectly fine in some cases unless you talk to me about it.

Your prologue is a start and I enjoyed it somewhat. I don't like the layout as much, it just doesn't seem to fit the One Direction romance story that you are trying to put in here. Also, I think you should fix the summary, it was actually a bore but like I had said, I loved your style of writing.

Okay, let me start off by saying that I do not like 1D AT ALL. I've read a million stories about them but this one is very interesting. your style of writing is different I love it

Okay, let me start off by saying that I do not like 1D AT ALL. I've read a million stories about them but this one is very interesting. your style of writing is different I love it

Whoa okay I didn't expect it to be one Direction, took me right till the very end to realise. I saw their dress rehearsals for X-factor one time, it was the time they did summer of 69. I must admit although they aren't really my cup of tea they all have very good voices! :D

Anyway your story, I really enjoyed your writing style, it's very clear and there wasn't a point where I didn't understand what was going on. I liked Harry's character. Overall it's a very good start to a story! :)

This is interesting, I quite liked it. I've never read 1d fan fiction before, but this was worth it. There were a few typing errors, but nothing too severe(one thing was when Harry and Bray were at the restaurant, you said he got 'stake' but when talking about the food, it's spelled 'steak'). All in all, this was an interesting start and I look forward to reading more of it, so I'll subscribe now.

This is very interesting! I'm quite curious how it will turn out!
And I love your view on Snooki. I have the exact same thoughts of her... she really does look like an Oompa Loompa O.o

I like this :) I'm looking forward to see how it goes for them in America.