I'm liking this. The chemistry between John and Halen is well written and I love this bits of banter with his family thrown in there. I hope you had fun at The Maine's show! I'm seeing them in November. I can't wait to see what's next for this story!
This chapter is so perfect. I always love when people meet their significant others' family. So obviously I'm looking forward to the next chapter where they all sit down!! And I know you'll have fun at the This Century and The Maine show!! I saw This Century in August on their US tour with Austin Gibbs and it was perfect.
Okay, okay, okay. I like Jagger. Thank you for proving me wrong. Hahaha. This was just delightful. I really like how much you're building up John and Halen's relationship. Also, I'm really excited to read more about this Steven character.
I really enjoy this story. It's original, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it's going to go. Keep it up. Also, I like all the names. Is Roth named after David Lee Roth?
I really, really, like where you're going with this and I really hope you update again soon! I get excited when I come on and see that you have!! Keep up the solid work!