Haha, that was funny she didn't know who Sid was and why he didn't like it when the Kings won And LOL at Vero being freaked out by that, I bet her and Flower did the same thing
Oh wow. El Capitain got seriously steamy with a girl he barely knows. I like that you're playing up his confidence because most stories play him up to be so innocent that he can barely function around a girl. The way you make him seem like he has it all figured out makes for a really good story. I'm so ready for more. p.s. have a good vacaction.