Destination Detonation - Comments

Comment swap time!
AWWWW confused need to read prequel!!
AHHHH but this story is still amazing ! keep it going , very interesting plot i am very interested in seeing what the heck is going on lol but that's a good thing!
Good luck with future writing

I'm from comment swap. I don't really know My Chemical Romance all that well but I liked the story. Your characters are good but the plot left me a bit cafuzzled as I've not read the prequel. Your descriptions are detailed and I like your writing style; the story just seems to flow smoothly. I didn't see any errors whatsoever and your spellings are about a trillion times better than mine :) The only real criticism I can give is that the layouts a bit bright but that's no big deal. Keep up the good work and I'll be recommending :)

I just read the first three chapters, gonna go back and read the prequel when I get the time. Love this story; Killjoy fics never seem to disappoint. Really good so far. I'll definitely be back for more, and this is definitely subscribed. xo

I love the names they are using here. Finally a decent Killjoys story that is well written, and well thought out! :) I haven't read the entire thing yet, but after the first couple of chapters, I am already wildly intrigued. :) I'll be subscribing to this now, and will continue reading it once I have more time.

Oh, I liked the two updates. Can't wait to read more of it.':)

The first chapter of the sequel was great. I can't wait to read more of it. :)

I loved the prequel so much that I couldn't stop reading it. The way she found her sister was awesome and hated how the ghosts took her and how she decided to turn herself in. The descriptions for this was good and at showing the reader that some time had indeed past. Wondering when the second chapter is going up? Who on earth is this destroya character also (if it is a character)?