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  • littlemisslonely

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    The last line was brilliant. I need to know why she knows all that. Haha.
    July 8th, 2012 at 03:34am
  • danimurphy27

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    LMFAO I love that last line "I'm not a fan"
    Great first chapter
    Update soon.
    July 4th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • Juno

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    you've got me interested. so i'll bite.
    July 3rd, 2012 at 12:37am
  • Little Robyn;

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    I enjoy hugging moose.

    That's beside the point. I really love how this starts. It' sso different from what I've read and from what I've written it's intense. I love the last line. "I'm not a fan." Something about that concept is absolutely amazing. I feel like Harry's going to try and sweep her off her feet but she's not going to allow it.

    I'm really looking forward to this :) The layout is simple, the writing is phenomenal and it's just great. I can't wait to see what you two have planned for this :)
    July 3rd, 2012 at 12:34am
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