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  • Juicebox Child

    Juicebox Child (250)

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    Thanks :)
    June 21st, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • JesusOfSuburbia

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    Wow, that's really great so far! I love the detail, can't wait to see more. :)
    June 21st, 2012 at 08:38am
  • Juicebox Child

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    Thanks for the tip and the comment, I'll space it out now :)
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:14pm
  • LauraJamCook

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    Wow, I really like this! One thing I would say is maybe add more paragraphing as it becomes hard to read, but the story so far is enthralling, I can't wait for more :) x
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:02pm
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