The Pale Walls - Comments

I, oddly enough, love that your writing is vague. Usually I get so into a story that when the writer is vague it gets a bit frustrating (on the reader's part), but I'm really just curious right now. I'm curious about both Gerard and Frank's ages and how different they are. I'm curious as to how they met and how they became romantically/sexually involved. I'm curious about each of their lives in general. Basically, I think your story has potential and I'm really curious to see where you may lead it. Please try to find the time to update!!

Kuddos on this being a My Chemical Romance story! It is a really good, original idea that i haven't seen before which giving you that extra edge to your story, making it more enjoyble. I really hope that you update soon because I loved it. Really good writing and I really enjoyed it
-Maddison.

Kuddos on this story being a My Chemical Romance fanfic. I absoultley loved it! I liked the concept of your story and you don't see much of it which gives it an original edge to it. I loved it!

Ahh, I love this, I love stories that have an age difference! :D
I love your writing style, I'm looking forward to the next part! xo <3

I love the way you wrote this. It's simple but very poignant. I'm looking forward to part two.

This very interestingly written. I like it! It's vague, but it consists of the major details.