In my opinion, I think the short entries are okay. I mean, it is a journal after all. But, whatever floats one's rubber ducky. I'm not liking Frank's parents. Seriously, moving to a whole new different place just because Frank fell in love with the same sex? Inappropriate.
I love the concept of this story and I cant wait to read more :D And I love 'Journal, you think I could get emancipated? Yeah, me neither.' <-this ! (':
Another good entry :3 I can imagine Frank on his bed being pissed and scribbling away angrily in the first paragraph, then getting softer when writing about Christian, and thoughtful when asking his Journal about being emancipate :)
"My life SUCKS! Mom snooped on my computer today while I was at school." This happened to me in 9th grade. It was one of the worst experiences of my life at the time lol. I'm sympathizing with Frank so hard right now.
This intrigues me in a way that I want to be the creeper that reads another person's journal :) Also, the way it starts and ends has a resemblance to the way I write my personal journal entries. I also agree with the others in how instead of going straight to Gerard, you're giving us a chance to get to know Frank first (: Can't wait for your next entry x]