Communicated - Comments

This is really trippy and pretty awesome. I'd have loved it if you added a little more detail and backstory and all, but the layout is absolutely gorgeous and the little slice-of-life snippets are fantastic! I love the ending as well. Lovely work!

I love P!ATD and I think that Brendon would be the person to survive a while in a zombie outbreak. The backstory did seem a little rushed, but I think it just leaves room for this one shot to be developed into a full story if you ever decide to. I also like the honesty in your writing. Brendon didn't become this crazy capable zombie killer within the year, he was just able to survive. It was realistic, but still exciting. And the ending, geez, I wanted there to be another chapter in which he's saved and everything will be okay. All in all, this is a great one shot!

Oh fuck.

This is just pure amazingness. I absolutely love, love, love it!

I love the lay out. It's very easy to read and well spaced out.

The whole thingw as a little rushed but I understand that it was a one shot. I really like your writing style and can't find any fault with your spelling or grammar which is normally so prevalent on Mibba.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your works

Hey, I'm from comment swap :-)

I'm going to have to agree with Matty and say that your layout is fabulous! I love the gif and the background and the um, everything!

This story kind of reminds me of the movie Contagion, I don't know if you've seen it.

Your grammar and spellings are perfect, I just thing you moved very quickly. I understand you were rushing for a contest, but you could have developed the plot a little more.

Apart from that, a great story. Keep up the good work.

First of, I absolutely love your layout! It's amazing!

Second; I like this one-short, though Zombie stories really aren't my thing at all, and I don't really like Brendon Urie either, but I definitely adore this story! It's so f*cking amazing, and I love the way you write, detailed yet not too detailed, you know?
Absolutely amazing.

I like plot a lot as well, it's simple yet really detailed. Normally people don't get a lot out of one-shots but this was amazing, well-written, good and you name it. But one thing that kinda confusses me/annoy me, is all the "breaks" you have. Like in the end, you have a lot of deviders, and in my opinion it's too much. But that'd be the only "negative" thing I have about this story :)

I'd first like to say that I absolutely adore your layout. It's plain, simple, and easy to read. The gif at the top is lovely.

You have an amazing way of writing; this was absolutely enthralling, and I enjoyed reading every bit of it.
Keep up the amazing work, because you've done a fantastic job with this!

And I hope you win or have already won those contests you've submitted this to~

Gahhh, that was fucking amaaazing! I love how you totally turned a true event into something that makes me want to shit my pants even contemplating the entire concept. Loved this. :)

v. Aw, well, that spoiled the ending. Oops. I guess that's kind of my fault for having the comments bar open.

I don't know why, but the like 'just another case of cannibalism' sounds way funnier to me than it was meant to be. This is actually a really interesting topic to write about, I've been waiting for someone to write about the Miami Zombies. I'm not terribly familiar with Panic at the Disco, but this is really fun to read anyway. Brendon it making me laugh with his paranoia, and I like the dialogue between the bandmates.

The pacing threw me off a little bit with the major time jump. I was going to say it would have been nice to read about the state of the world dissolving, but as a oneshot you wouldn't have had time, so I understand the decision. The line breaks are a little distracting, though - maybe try cutting down on those a bit?

I like the description in this. Very sleek, simple writing that's very clear and easy to follow. Very detailed. This was really enjoyable to read, and I thank you for writing it. :)

When I read the summary I got way excited to read this. Even though I'm not a huge fan of P!ATD. But Zombies ftw! I'd freak out if I saw that on the news though. I think I'll look that up actually.

This was a tad short but didn't lack anything from the descriptions or suspense.

Damn! They died?? So sad! :(

I really really enjoyed this and am so glad that comment swap brought me here! ;D I really wish that this had gone on for longer though! Like a really long one-shot or a couple chapters or something! Ha, I would have definitely kept reading. I love zombie stories and yours was really good! :D