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  • antivist.

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    Wii! :DD More! moe! more! :3
    October 6th, 2012 at 06:07am
  • Space Juju

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    Finally! LOVE their relationship and yeah I need more xD
    October 6th, 2012 at 05:24am
  • Space Juju

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    I love this story so much! Please update as soon as you can!
    October 2nd, 2012 at 01:09am
  • hidans_hoe

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    This is just great. I love how you picked something from the comic and made it so much bigger than it has ever been told. I love it! :D
    September 5th, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • GlitterMonsterx3

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    LOVE IT! :D
    August 27th, 2012 at 11:05pm
  • rainbow.dinosaur

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    Aw :) I loved this chapter!
    August 27th, 2012 at 10:09pm
  • CallingHome

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    Keep it going, keep it going, keep it going, pleasee! My only recommendation is that you try making longer chapters, they're a bit short, :) I love it.
    August 26th, 2012 at 07:36pm
  • gatess

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    Twitch Loki, lawd... I agree with Rosie, gettin' into a chapter and realize it's already done makes me wanna wail.. I'll be looking forward for the update! ^.^
    August 26th, 2012 at 06:56am
  • rose.chan27

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    I love the story! The only thing I would change is the length of the chapters! I would be greatly happy if you could make them longer? Or at the very least keep writing it fast so I can read more VERY soon. Pretty please?
    August 20th, 2012 at 05:41am
  • hidans_hoe

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    This. Is. Awesome. I absolutely love how you write it moment-by-moment. It adds a lot of intensity to the story. Chapter 6 was phenomenal. Recommended and subscribed! Btw, your friend ShelbzFunSized referred me to you. :)
    August 2nd, 2012 at 12:10am
  • bonitalita

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    Uh... did i do that... love it takes me back to watching Urkel lol
    July 27th, 2012 at 09:00am
  • basket case

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    Don't forget to update! D:
    July 8th, 2012 at 07:28pm
  • basket case

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    I really like this! Don't forget to update really soon! :)
    July 1st, 2012 at 07:41am
  • xxanythingbutthisxx

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    Please continue to update, I like the writing style you have going on here!
    June 29th, 2012 at 10:38am
  • ccarsen3

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    :) please keep writing, this could get good Wink
    June 28th, 2012 at 10:45pm
  • darklightdancer

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    I like this it has a good start I hope you write more :)
    June 28th, 2012 at 08:28pm
  • Blessedelua

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    short, but it has the potential to be really good!!!
    June 20th, 2012 at 08:24am
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