Keep it going, keep it going, keep it going, pleasee! My only recommendation is that you try making longer chapters, they're a bit short, :) I love it.
Loki, lawd... I agree with Rosie, gettin' into a chapter and realize it's already done makes me wanna wail.. I'll be looking forward for the update! ^.^
I love the story! The only thing I would change is the length of the chapters! I would be greatly happy if you could make them longer? Or at the very least keep writing it fast so I can read more VERY soon. Pretty please?
This. Is. Awesome. I absolutely love how you write it moment-by-moment. It adds a lot of intensity to the story. Chapter 6 was phenomenal. Recommended and subscribed! Btw, your friend ShelbzFunSized referred me to you. :)