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  • harrys.

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    I found this through 'Reckless', I think, and I'm glad I did. I like your style of writing even if you said you're new to third person. This story is good so far, can't wait to read more :)
    May 6th, 2013 at 09:40am
  • vices

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    AWH, ALEX ISN'T SCUM! D:
    when I first typed that I actually wrote, "AWH, ALEX ISN'TS CUM!"
    and then I nearly died, HAHAHAHAHA.
    please update soon!
    November 4th, 2012 at 08:19pm
  • lovelyhope

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    I love how this story is being told by Alex in the present so it's third person but also his point of view. I also love how sassy Claire is and how she isn't scared to play his game and stand up to him.
    November 4th, 2012 at 12:46am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    I love this story. Can't wait for more. I think its good Claire didn't give in to him just yet. Make him work for it.
    November 3rd, 2012 at 11:53pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :o
    November 3rd, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • ashleighpeta

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    loved it!
    November 3rd, 2012 at 11:09pm
  • vices

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    THIS IS SO CUTE
    HOLY CRAP
    I LOVE THIS
    October 12th, 2012 at 06:39am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    Really like this story. I can't wait for more chapters.
    October 9th, 2012 at 10:41pm
  • lovelyhope

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    What the heck really went down on New Year's Eve? Because it sounds as if it changed both Claire and Alex. I'm dying to see how they interact.
    August 20th, 2012 at 12:37am
  • earthtoclaire

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    hey lauren
    hey
    just
    leavin this here.
    you know.
    casually.
    ok.
    August 13th, 2012 at 04:41am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    oh dang.. and p.s. i also went to varp tour for the first time ever and met them XD, Pierce the Veil had an awesome set when i saw them :p
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:51am
  • lovelyhope

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    Is Clare still thinking about the New Year's kiss? It must hav been pretty memorable and Alex must have left quite an impression on her especially since she's so set on being independent. Can't wait to see what happens when they meet up again.
    July 24th, 2012 at 05:49am
  • earthtoclaire

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    i just shat myself
    July 22nd, 2012 at 06:09am
  • vivalasjenna

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    So, she knows that Alex is in the band All Time Low, even when she kissed him? All in all, it's a wonderful chapter. I understand the whole set up thing you're talking about. It's a good idea, because your chapters are always fucking amazing!

    PTV's new album is amazing! I'm not a huge fan but after this album I think I consider myself one :3
    July 21st, 2012 at 09:10am
  • OrdinaryRiches

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    I'm super stoked to read more! And the fact that she knew who he was made her move even more ballsy. Go Claire!
    July 21st, 2012 at 08:38am
  • lovelyhope

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    Dang, she has some guts. I like that she did that though...a lot of girls wouldn't. I can't wait to see how Alex officially meets her.
    July 9th, 2012 at 08:09pm
  • vivalasjenna

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    That was a really cute chapter (: I hope he finds her again, and hopefully soon!
    July 9th, 2012 at 10:25am
  • k45766238

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    This is getting even better!
    July 9th, 2012 at 06:49am
  • NobodyCares

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    This looks like it is going to be a really good story, keep up the good work!
    July 9th, 2012 at 12:13am
  • k45766238

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    This looks great so far! I love your writing. :)
    July 5th, 2012 at 06:15am
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