To Be Broken - Comments

I found this through 'Reckless', I think, and I'm glad I did. I like your style of writing even if you said you're new to third person. This story is good so far, can't wait to read more :)

AWH, ALEX ISN'T SCUM! D:
when I first typed that I actually wrote, "AWH, ALEX ISN'TS CUM!"
and then I nearly died, HAHAHAHAHA.
please update soon!

I love how this story is being told by Alex in the present so it's third person but also his point of view. I also love how sassy Claire is and how she isn't scared to play his game and stand up to him.

I love this story. Can't wait for more. I think its good Claire didn't give in to him just yet. Make him work for it.

:o

loved it!

THIS IS SO CUTE
HOLY CRAP
I LOVE THIS

Really like this story. I can't wait for more chapters.

What the heck really went down on New Year's Eve? Because it sounds as if it changed both Claire and Alex. I'm dying to see how they interact.

hey lauren
hey
just
leavin this here.
you know.
casually.
ok.

oh dang.. and p.s. i also went to varp tour for the first time ever and met them XD, Pierce the Veil had an awesome set when i saw them :p

Is Clare still thinking about the New Year's kiss? It must hav been pretty memorable and Alex must have left quite an impression on her especially since she's so set on being independent. Can't wait to see what happens when they meet up again.

i just shat myself

So, she knows that Alex is in the band All Time Low, even when she kissed him? All in all, it's a wonderful chapter. I understand the whole set up thing you're talking about. It's a good idea, because your chapters are always fucking amazing!

PTV's new album is amazing! I'm not a huge fan but after this album I think I consider myself one :3

I'm super stoked to read more! And the fact that she knew who he was made her move even more ballsy. Go Claire!

Dang, she has some guts. I like that she did that though...a lot of girls wouldn't. I can't wait to see how Alex officially meets her.

That was a really cute chapter (: I hope he finds her again, and hopefully soon!

This is getting even better!

This looks like it is going to be a really good story, keep up the good work!

This looks great so far! I love your writing. :)