A Family Affair - Comments

Wow, I adored this! I really love the ending too, and just the whole feel of it. Great stuff.

This was quite good! It was quite obvious from the beginning that someone would be having an affair because of the picture, but I LOVED how it turned out to be his sister! Well done! :)

I really liked this. It was simple and to the point, although lacking in description. Otherwise, besides the below mentioned error, it was very good. I love the concept, very creative. Also, I commend your writing style. It takes true talent for me to enjoy reading something.

I really liked this. It was simple and to the point, although lacking in description. Otherwise, besides the below mentioned error, it was very good. I love the concept, very creative. :D

This is a good story, I found it interesting. I would have never thought of something like this! First of all, I would like to praise you on how I seem to be finding no grammar and punctuation mistakes. I loved the basic idea of Melissa being bisexual and sleeping with siblings without knowledge of it. And how I really enjoy your description. Well done so keep on writing :)

whoa I so I didn't see that coming! Nice job, I always love to be surprised at the end of stories. I liked how you had Melissa be bisexual and sleeping with siblings without knowledge of it, that definitely made things get interesting. Great job with this. Thanks so much for entering my contest. I really liked this =]

Error : lad I could help.
Wow, this is...something else. Very different, I've never read anything like it before. Glad to see someone thinking outside of the box.
I enjoy the way you described the characters through their actions, it left enough to the imagination, yet painted a detailed picture at the same time.
Nicely done, good luck on the contest.