Leap of Faith - Comments

Came here from the Comment Swap(:

I love reading Avenged Sevenfold stories so I was happy to see I got this. I was little confusing for me in the beginning with the way the story was written. I wasn't really able to connect with the characters but I'm excited to see what happens when "Shads" and Brian find out about the whole deal. I liked the layout, it was nicely done! Can't wait to finish up the story! Keep up the Avenged Sevenfold stories!

So comment swap brought me here.
i really loved this story and I just got back from Download where I saw Avenged Sevenfold so I was reallllllllly happy when I saw it was a Brain story.
So I have to wrote some more because comment swap hates me, but I have no idea what to write.
The layout was really nice, simple but effective. I really did enjoy the story. There were times where I kinda hated them both but other then that i really liked it.
The ending was so sweat and nice as well.
Hope this comment its long enough. If not then I'll have to comment again.
Bye!

I love the layout. It suits what I read of the story. But honestly from what I read; half way through chapter three, I think it was, it appeared to be ralatively reliant on the dialogue between characters to build the plot, relationships and characters themselves. I mean, personally I feel as though you are TELLING us how it happens rather than SHOWING us and letting us feel how they felt. I just feel as though I didn't connect with Ashley or Brian. Perhaps it was just me. The plot seemed somewhat interesting, though.

First of all, cool layout. Not a fan, but the story is pretty well written. The whole plot seemed weird, but you managed to put it together so it worked. I don’t know why but as I read, at some times I hate Brian and Ashley, and other times I love Brian and Ashley. It’s a good story :)

I love this <3

I'm sad it's over but loved the ending.

Mari!!!! Thanks girl!! But all things must come to an end...who know's what else is in store

Now I'm sad because it's over, but happy because it worked out!!! Oh I love/hate this part right here, when a good story is done...but I loved this overall!

great update and now I just wanna urgh, strangle them both for some reason. Mostly Brian..assface. haha XD

Update soon, gotta see where this is going!

Thanks for updating though!
I love this story.. :P

Thanks for updating though!
I love this story.. :P

its been almost a year, and now he is finally getting off his ass to come find her? I hate him. I hate him so clucking much until he make the big gesture.. and crying like a sop in the rain only makes me hate him more.

Okay really? Really?! You go all the way up there to talk to the girl and then bail out like a loser and cry in the rain?! Will they ever talk?!!

Brian is a fucking ass-tard. He needs to get off his high horse and realize that she is more important to him than his stupid pride, and it's not like she was stripping their whole relationship, and it's not like she was doing anything sexual with them.. so i hate Brian until he realizes he is a fuck-up and that Ashley is the best thing to ever happen to him.. Thanks for the update(:

Okay so Brian didn't have to be such a dick, but I understand that he's hurt. After everything they'd been through I thought he could have gotten over it, but like i said he was hurt. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Aha, you got me. I totally didn't see the stripper thing coming! But I loved it! I love that barrista by day, stripper by night kind of thing. I'm no A7x fan, but I enjoyed the story. I thought the pace kind of went too quickly toward the end of the first chapter, but otherwise I liked it a lot. I will certainly keep reading. Keep up the good work, and good luck!

Comment swap! This is a beautiful story. I've always loved A7x fan fics, and this one is no different! Your grammar and spelling are both superb and your layout makes the story very easy to read. I can't wate for the next chapter. Subscribed! ^_^

Ohmylord.. she should not have gone back to stripping. Val is such a little brat face.i hate her. i love this story thought! (: It's great.. at the end of every chapter, i get really excited to see "ashley's outfits" they are great. lol(:

Damn her! She didn't have to do that! I'm so dying to know what happens! They've already been through so much!!!

Comment swap. I like your layout, its probably the first things I say because yours is very catching and smooth, not to harsh on my eyes. I like your paragraphs their better when they are shorter cos its easier to read. I like what I’ve read of your story it’s really inter4ested me. Good job =)