Time Isn't on My Side - Comments

Oh, goodness: "...except Louis isn't counting..." I am so done, because that was perfect. I love how Harry's just going on about life as normal and then Louis is all freaked out because he knows that this shouldn't be happening, but it is happening, and honestly I'd be much worse, just running around and screaming things and being a completely messy hot mess. XD I'm very suspicious about the color gold appearing absolutely everywhere, and then as I read on, I just die because Niall is watching the toaster and that is exactly what I do, Niall and I are just kindred spirits, okay. XD And Zayn, no, Zayn go sit down because no, I bet you would faint like a girl, too, if you were experiencing this insanity, okay (but I still love you, believe it) and then NIALL CHEERS BECAUSE OF THE DAMN TOASTER SERIOUSLY HE AND I WERE MADE TO BE OH JESUS CHRIST I AM DONE. And then Louis begins to walk away and then more gold, which is intriguing and terrifying, because I'm not trusting that light, like, at all. This is crazy, but I'm so interested that I can't look away (of course) and then the creature-the (possible) sir speaking before such a confused Louis, but the creature, he has it all together, okay, seriously. And Louis, now you have a chance, pleasepleaseplease don't screw it up because you caN DO IT. GET YOU SOME HARRY. (I am way too excited but it's okay because I'm in love.)

Hello, there! I appreciate your writing, so we are even. <3

This is such a great story, I just got out of a bad relationship and this is like remaking my past. If you get what I mean, I hope you do indeed continue

Okay, I've never read a 1D fic and let me just say that thIS IS UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL. The first chapter filled with me with a bunch of feelings and the sorrow and the pain that Louis felt and I just couldn't handle it. The description and the feelings, it's all worded so beautifully and I don't know how to feel or what to do at the current moment. The end of the chapter, oh, God, my heart. When he went down the stairs and then it when it went to the hospital, I found myself getting scared and when Harry hugged him, I went, "Awww!" so, so loud. I think I've scared my mother. Whoops. And then the second chapter, the whole beginning half, I felt so bad and felt as though I was going to cry. Louis has to suffer through this wedding, such a mess, and then Harry, fucking Harry! Oh. Just...oh. Louis. Poor Louis, I need to hug him and hold tight and just...never let go ever and then he can't hurt from Harry ever AGAIN. But the second half of the chapter, oh my God. How beautifully perfect can this be? Hold on, busy dying: "...to Harry, scantily clad in absolutely nothing." That is the most perfect way to put it. And then Louis faints with this line: ...and it's kind of too late because Louis's already out cold." Oh my goodness gracious alive, the tears. I am in love.

You are such a fabulous writer, like, wow. I shall stalk your stories more when I receive the time, hopefully, as for now, I must be off. BOO FOR GOING OUTSIDE IN THE FROZENNESS UGH.

YOU HAVE TO KEEP ON. If you stop how do you expect me to move on with my life? This is amazing. I mean it, it is so great and I love it so much. I can't speak, I need more now, llike RIGHT NOW. I'm gonna cry. This is so beautiful yet it hurts insanely, I need MORE. Please I beg you with everything I have inside of me.

Thank you so much so much soooooooo much! Oh my Gosh, this was the best thing someone's done to me, like, ever!! Or feels like it *-* I am so unbelievebly excited about reading it.

I love itttttt. I need more. Please update?

Dear God, I love this so much. I remember a while back reading your Ryan/Brendon one that was kind of like this, and I just can't. It's already amazing.

Very interesting (: can't wait to see how this all turns out

Please continue this story; it's already interesting and I'm curious as to where you're going to go with the plot. :)

I can't wait for more! It's really interesting!

This plot sounds really, really good! :')