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  • NobodyCares

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    I really like this, it's so different than anything I have ever read. Keep up the good work!
    July 14th, 2012 at 11:43am
  • Untold Story

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    I love the way this is written, and I'm so anticipating the two of them to meet. This is amazing. Update soon?
    July 14th, 2012 at 08:39am
  • I_Am_Sherlocked

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    I'm thrilled you updated, but that teasing comment about the next chapter is just too mean! I cannot wait for this to continue and I can't help but wonder what it'll be like when the two finally meet
    July 14th, 2012 at 08:36am
  • letsburnthiscitydown

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    More more more! <3
    July 14th, 2012 at 08:31am
  • fascination.

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    i love how Alex described Adam Lambert, its funny x). I'm so excited for these two to meet, the anticipation is literally killing me haha. Even when I saw that you updated this I got really excited and my eyes got really wide haha. and i can't wait until you throw jack into the picture as you said before :D this should be good.
    July 14th, 2012 at 07:42am
  • fromunderthesun

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    I cannot even fully express how much I adore this. Please, please update as soon as possible! I've never found anything like this at all - it's so well-written, thrilling, and just... Brilliant! SUCH a good read. <33
    July 14th, 2012 at 06:28am
  • burn fast glow long.

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    Update soon! This is so cute c:
    July 14th, 2012 at 05:40am
  • letsburnthiscitydown

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    This story has been fucking perfect so far, and refreshing, and perfect. Did I mention it's perfect? KEEPS ME WANTING MOREEEEE
    July 12th, 2012 at 07:25am
  • DontFuckTheBurrito

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    I really love this story! It's very well written, and is funny too. :)
    July 11th, 2012 at 08:33am
  • Haley'sfreakingout

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    Holy crap please update soon, this is amazing.
    July 10th, 2012 at 02:45am
  • Sour Patch Kids

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    I remember this from quizilla. Oh goodness, I adore this story so much it's almost ridiculous. But only almost.
    July 10th, 2012 at 01:21am
  • myheartbeatsredwine

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    This is actually so fucking awesome. I've just reached the end of the first part and I'm enthralled. It's amazing. :)
    July 9th, 2012 at 08:32pm
  • fascination.

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    This whole idea is pure genius, you did a great job on the summary <3. I'm so pumped to read it just because of that :)! and the story involves warped tour, you just can't go wrong.

    At first I was a bit confused about how's POV it was after the line break, but now I get it. OKAY, this is allll alex. Maybe get rid of the part at the beginning and add it to the end? Because at the beginning he said he's found the black book, and then he finds its later - like explaining and its a bit confusing, at least to me is all x).

    Honestly, if this happened to me , I would do teh same thing as Alex. Curiosity kills us all haha. whoever wrote the book is quite funny too. I like the "I'd rather not associate with someone incapable of a Grade 1 riddle."

    I really like how interested Alex is in this whole book, and I don't know, you portray him very well. It seems as if he would act this way in regular day life from what I've seen as a huge fan of All Time Low :).

    I AM curious to know how the bartender knew about his order. Maybe he knows who wrote the book? Or maybe people have tried it before? Either way, I'm freaking curious to find out!

    I think this is one of the best stories I've EVER read on here, its so original and freaking amazing. I'm honestly aching to meet Emma and see how the two interact. Time for chapter two :D!

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    I love how Emma all the groups of kids and what they do. To be honest, you're spot freaking on. You're quite the amazing writer, if my opinion counts for anything haha :).

    I like how she's very laid back, and likes the style of just being with herself and enjoying it. I feel like people always want to associate with other people 24/7 to be pleased, and like Emma, I like to sit down with a book and a good movies sometimes haha. I really like teh girl already.

    The way Alice and Emma interact is perfect. It reminds me so much of my best friend and I. How she is always determined to find me this person to love and do a bunch of stupid things such as drink and smoke while I just want to wach movies and talk with her. I don't know, I really like relating with characters, so I think I'm already sunk into this damn story already! It truly is great :).

    I loe how Alice is judging Alex on his drink choice already, i think its great. Shes very intuitive. Emma and Aliec seem like they wouldn't go together very well as friends; but i think its almost perfect :D!

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    I think finding someone through a game-type thing is actually kind of cool. How is that NOT romantic ?Oh, Emma, fall for something , take chances :).

    Aw, i love her ideas on roamnce. Like how she wants it, but doesn't really know how to get it. I'm already imagining scenarios with her and Alex - and I can't wait for them to meet, or at least talk! and his nickname is Flippy, that's perfect.

    I love how she just screamed in the middle of the McDonalds, but hey, whatever works for her. I know how that is, when you forget to do something and you still have itme - so youre extremely urgent.

    I absolutely adore these two so much. I love how well you portray alex, as I said before, and how amazing Emma is as a person - I don't know, I relaly like them. The girl is damn smart to go through all those clues to figure out to go to a Miley Cyrus CD haha.

    I'm so happy to have found this amazing story, cause I'm quite in love as I said before. I'm defenitly subscribing, and I'm VERY excited to get the next update :), keep up the amazing work!
    June 24th, 2012 at 09:59pm
  • burn fast glow long.

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    This was a great update! Emma's hilarious. Can't wait for more!
    June 24th, 2012 at 07:40pm
  • Breepocket

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    oh god im loving this.
    please more soon? because i really wanna see how this plays out!
    June 24th, 2012 at 07:36pm
  • I_Am_Sherlocked

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    Loved the update, the clues you come up with for this wild goose chase are great and I love just how sarcastic Emma is. Can't wait for more.
    June 24th, 2012 at 07:31pm
  • burn fast glow long.

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    This is really, really cute. I love the idea! Your writing is refreshing and believable, and your characters are very likable. Can't wait for the next update :)
    June 23rd, 2012 at 03:29am
  • I_Am_Sherlocked

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    Okay, I can honestly say that this is potentially one of the best stories I have read on here. It's got such an intriguing storyline and such an original concept. I adore the hint of mystery to it and the main character's scepticism was so refreshing to the usual, over-done party girl, up for anything types you usually get in a story about any of the ATL boys. Love it!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 06:24pm
  • Breepocket

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    Like it so far. I hope there's more soon
    June 22nd, 2012 at 05:07pm