I really love this so far. There are a few parts that are a little awkwardly worded, particularly some spots in the summary, but it's nothing too major. The layout is nice but a bit difficult to read, but that might just be my eyes. I really love the suspenseful ending and I'm looking forward to see where you go with this! :)
First, I like your theme. I think it flows well with the story and what it consist of. Your writing style seems a little harsh to me, but that is something that will probably go away as you write more. The first chapter and summary are very intriguing and I enjoyed it a lot.
Well, I liked this. The tone you created was mysterious and I have to say very cool! Your writing is good and this story is too. I found this promising and I can't wait to read more.
I'm not usually into vampire, werewolves, witches, etc. kind of stories but I really liked this first chapter. I loved the banner, although I found it a little difficult to read... I'm subscribing :)