Forever and Ever - Comments

Oh my God. That was so amazing ,,# You need to write another Jimmy story! Hopefully a happy one where he's alie D=
But this was so good, I just.. Just.. *stands. applauds*

This is actually pretty good! :)

Okay, I've read this like three times XD

That sex was hawt by the way...

This was really good! Your story actually made me tear up. You did an outstanding job!

Good luck in the contest :)

I really liked how it was a hurting mix between suicidal idealations and a hot lemon. It really ended well as well. You are a good writer.

I just thought I would let you know from the standpoint of someone who has spent time in a mental hospital before; the quick release like that really wouldn't have happened. Especially if she was there for suicide.

Also, if she had been in the hospital and pregnant for that long and they hadn't realized it then they would be set up for a lawsuit.

While they might have been necessary for the plot they make it rather unrealistic for people who have experience with that kind of thing.

Besides that, the slightly confusing multiple plot jumps, and over-abundant use of "I" when starting new sentences and paragraphs it was pretty good. Please keep writing.

I don't know if it is my computer...but it's like I can't get to the chapter, lol