I really love this story and the way it's going already, but I feel like it's progressing to quickly. I'm definitely subscribing to see what happens and to see you develop your characters. I hope something blooms between Steve and Alexis~ Also, you might want to read over your chapters before you post them. There weren't any grammatical errors that made the story hard to read, they were just silly ones that could have been caught had you skimmed through it before posting; same goes for any spelling errors. All in all, I really like this story and your layout is absolutely beautiful. Keep up the hard work and please update soon! :D
Thanks (and yes, I am quite aware of the unrealistic-ism haha)
And I have such a problem with Mary Sue characters, but I think it kinda fixes itself as it goes on and more character development.. or at least I think so. If you have any tips on making her less 'mary sue', I'd love to hear them! I'm always up for learning more and advancing my writing. Especially since I'm not very good, haha.
Yay, I found another Captain fic. It's great that this one is so well-written too. There are few grammar mistakes, the plot seems easy to follow (although some things seem a tad bit unrealistic), and it seems like you update frequently. That's really good, haha. :)
Although Alexis kind of seems like a Mary Sue character. Constantly referring to a character as stunning, beautiful, perfect, etc, is a little... I don't know. Those descriptions are positive when describing someone, but in most stories it just casts a negative light on the character from the reader. That's just my take on her.
Regardless, I'm subscribing. I love where you're going with this. :)