Imperfection - Comments

I like the layout, it's simple and nice. The story is beautifully written, with detail and description scattered here and there. The story flows nicely and overall it's an awesome story. I barely found any errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation, so keep up the great work(:

Im writing a similar story actuallly, check it out if you get a chance lol X)
but as for your story:
so i think it has potential. i find the writing a bt boring almost like it is sarcastic. if that makes sence. the idea is goo d and i htink you have an interesting story to tell just make sure you tell it as tragic as it actually make you feel. good luck :)