June 27th, 2012 at 05:08pm
Only Fools Rush In - Comments
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it's really great so far for only two chapter! i hope you keep it up and update soon! it obviously doesn't go along with reality, but then again most student/teacher stories (especially fanfictions) don't. i think i'm going to subscribe and come back in probably about a month to see how well this story is doing-that's actually a huge thing for me cause i don't really check up on stories i subscribe to. until then, keep it up!June 27th, 2012 at 03:24am
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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *grabby hands* keep writing!!! :D you're good!!!! i love it when i find a good Jalex fanfic! X3June 27th, 2012 at 12:04am
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This is actually great! Should keep on writing it for defo!June 26th, 2012 at 02:03pm
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*irritate
sorry DXJune 26th, 2012 at 05:11am -
*irritate
sorry DXJune 26th, 2012 at 05:11am -
M'kay, well, I don't like ATL, but WOW, BRO. WOW. So, slash is my life, and student/teacher relationships are my guilty pleasure, so even though I don't like ATL's music that much, I really enjoy this! I forget that it's fanfiction, which, in my opinion, makes the best fanfics.So kudos!
The only bad thing I have to say is about the layout. At first glance, it wasn't bad, but then when I began reading, I noticed how... off(?) it was. The text box doesn't exactly match the background and the text colors don't match. Honestly, I love the pink, but the red title and white links kinda irritates me. Also, the chapter box is black, even though there's no other black in the entire layout.
I don't know, some of it might just be me being mildly OCD, but whatever. XD
Anywho, I'm subscribing, because your writing makes me happy. 8D
<3June 26th, 2012 at 05:09am -
THEY SHOULD BE PROUD OF ALEX
HE'S ONE HOT MOTHERFUCKER
okay sorry
This is too precious, too amazing, too too too dxdsbhfks
I love it.
Please, please, more soon?
xoxoJune 24th, 2012 at 09:33pm -
Are you aware you don't have a background? Unless it is suppose to be like that in which case never mind. This is quite good. The detail is stunning and I genuinely feel for Jack. I hope he has a happy ending. Good job doll :)June 24th, 2012 at 08:24pm
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I don't often read slash, but this story is well written and I like it. I dunno if you know this, but you're background isn't working- thought I'd let you know. I love the way you write. I can't pin-point what I like, but I just like it. I love All Time Low, and I'll be sure to subscribe to this story. Update soon c:June 24th, 2012 at 07:43pm
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Oh my freaking God
You've got me hooked. SERIOUSLY.
odshf too amazing
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Really good so far!(:June 22nd, 2012 at 05:10pm
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I really liked it :) most five I've read the people sounded like they just learned how to read. But yours sounds amazing :) the description of alex and jack was good and the description of Jack's emotions were amazing. Keep it up :)June 22nd, 2012 at 04:33pm
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Ohmygosh<3 I adore this. I just love the way you write. Please update soon! :DDJune 22nd, 2012 at 08:16am
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OhMyGee! That was AWESOME! I'm dffinatly comming back for more.
i love the Billie Joe insert (he's one of my hero's)
kepp writing that was amazing!June 22nd, 2012 at 06:05am -
I personally don't like jalex fics, or slash in general, but this is interesting. Your descriptions are just wonderful, words don't describe. The plot seems promising and it really did pull me in. I hope that you continue this story, i think it has wonderful places to go!June 22nd, 2012 at 05:22am
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so good<3June 22nd, 2012 at 04:18am
But this is really well written and descriptive
((I only read the first chapter, haha))
I hope you carry on writing with this story. :-)
Good luck!xoxo.