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  • Thingtastic

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    This story was indeed unique! The concept and plot were very original, and the layout totally fit! The way you described the gun piercing Ida's skin was very well written!
    Anyway be sure to check the contest page on the 23rd to see how you placed!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 08:24pm
  • Brit1818

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    This is so amazing! I really liked how you explained every detail of what was happening, this is why I love reading first person stories. I especiaaly liked the part when you described how she knew she was going to die when the gun had jammed and the bullets wouldn't come out. This is so good, please finish more of it! Good work!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 07:17am
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