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  • babydriver

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    The shuffle idea is really good, and I might try it sometime! I liked the first story best, but you could've made it a bit longer- i'd like to know what happens next within the first story- perhaps you could write a spin off?
    August 20th, 2012 at 02:09pm
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    The shuffle idea is really good, and I might try it sometime! I liked the first story best, but you could've made it a bit longer- i'd like to know what happens next.
    August 20th, 2012 at 02:04pm
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    The shuffle idea is really good, and I might try it sometime! I liked the first story best, but you could've made it a bit longer- i'd like to know what happens next.
    August 20th, 2012 at 02:03pm
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    The shuffle idea is really good, and I might try it sometime! I liked the first story best, but you could've made it a bit longer- i'd like to know what happens next.
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:50pm
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    Comment Swap: The shuffle idea is really good, and I might try it sometime! I liked the first story best, but you could've made it a bit longer- i'd like to know what happens next.
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:50pm
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    Comment Swap: The shuffle idea is really good, and I might try it sometime! I liked the first story best, but you could've made it a bit longer- i'd like to know what happens next.
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:38pm
  • The-Maine-Becky

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    I like the story to your music thing, and even though I didn't know who the charachters were I found first one cute! These are cool and I like your writing style! They're all really creative and unique ideas, and it's great!
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:20pm
  • KilljoyBekah

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    This is a pretty good idea, I was gonn do the same kind of thing, I've done one for Avril Lavigne's Remember When ^_^ I like the first one so far, although I don't know who the characters are. Good work!
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:08pm
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    Alrighty, so to begin, I have to say that I am not at all familiar with who Trisha and Cena are, so that made it hard for me to get into it, but because they were one shots, it made it easier to read them. I liked the first one. I thought it was cute. The second one wasn't as much of a fan of. I only read the 2 because it's late where I am and I'm tired :-p
    I really like the whole song story idea though. Maybe I'll try it some time :-p
    Good luck to you on your future writings! :)
    August 19th, 2012 at 05:59am