September 15th, 2012 at 09:09pm
Saviour - Comments
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Finish this with the trial of her father and make the sequel start some time after? Maybe.. Hmm.. Good chapter.September 15th, 2012 at 07:37pm
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I understand Andy's pain now. Bottling up emotions is just a not a good idea for anyone and all it does is hurts people. I love the way you had Lizzie speak up for herself. I would love to see this story end with something that makes me want more. I honestly don't know how I would want this to end. Maybe her dad going to prison but threatening her that he'll get her one day. Drama is a good way to do this. Thanks for the update. :)September 15th, 2012 at 07:35pm
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Sorry for not commenting for a while, but I read the whole. Awww no, the thing with her mom ... I wouldn't forgive too ... ever to be honest. And I felt like crying while reading the newest chapter, especially the end. :/ I can't see them both so down, but they'll get through it I hope.
And btw. I would have some ideas, but I would need time to think haha. I used to be an active writer, but stopped because I thought I wasn't good enough so I have a bit of experience. Sooo idek haha
But I love this so much. :')
BUT: I wouldn't put something like marriage very soon in it (Not that you shouldn't, I just mean that I wouldn't do this) haha I just like the whole girlfriend/boyfriend stuff soooo I'm not very into marriage in fanfics. :pSeptember 15th, 2012 at 06:58pm -
Okay. What the fuck is up with her mom! This whit is getting ridiculous. Andy needs to learn how to control him temper. This chapter was really good and I'm excited to see how things goSeptember 15th, 2012 at 02:47pm
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Omg!
Please tell me you are updating like soon!September 15th, 2012 at 12:04am -
her mom needs to mysteriously disappear.. just until things are good again at the least.. or maybe IDK.. good chapterSeptember 14th, 2012 at 08:15pm
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Love the chapters, i feel as though its leading up to something big though. Cant wait to see what is next.September 14th, 2012 at 06:56am
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Okay. That mom is psycho. She just needs to stay far away from Liz. I have a feeling something bad is going to happen. Andy needs to chill and stop getting so mad at her especially in her fragile state. It was a good chapter. :)September 13th, 2012 at 01:13am
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Damn.. I wonder just what hat mom was really hoping to gain from all of this? And in a publics place too? She could easily sue and arrest her ass as well, so it won't be just he "father" in jail. Good chapter.September 12th, 2012 at 08:14pm
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Totally awesome! I found this story yesterday and read every chapter. I love this story and I feel so bad for all the shit Lizzie has and is going through. I hope Andy and her new family help her through and make her better. Can't wait for more!September 12th, 2012 at 03:44pm
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Awesome!! lkdngflknwek n Gah!
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Great. Andy is angry. Awesome. I don't want her to forgive her mom. What her mom did is unforgiveable. This was a good chapter but I need to know why Andy is a little butt. Update soon. :DSeptember 12th, 2012 at 01:45am
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Uh oh! Angry Andy!I want to know what his problem is!!
Although I understand why she wants to try to forgive her mum and wants to introduce her to her boyfriend, I do kind of find it hard to believe that Lizzie would just let her back into her life that quickly and introduce her to Black Veil Brides already. I think I can understand Andy storming out but I really want to see what you write!
However, I do love this story and this chapter and can't wait to see what happens now between both Lizzie and Andy and Lizzie and her mum!
Jen xxSeptember 11th, 2012 at 09:01pm -
Fantastic update! Very powerfull.
And I know you don't know me, but if you ever need someone to talk to about anything, you are more then welcome to talk to me if you'd like. hun.September 11th, 2012 at 06:37pm -
I would! Especially if it was a hetero romance haha all the jacky ones are slashes and I want some guy on girl bahahahahaha. Loved the update!September 11th, 2012 at 05:36pm
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I expected as much.. I wonder what will be next and what is up with Andy. Hmm.. Good chapter.September 11th, 2012 at 02:19pm
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I like having it in both POV's! I don't know whats going to happen but I had a really bad feeling ever since the police said her mum had filed a report too. Part of me thinks the call could have been a hoax so that Lizzie would trust a member of her family and they could reel her in again. I'm definitely excited to see what happens though!!
Hope you feel better soon,
Jen xxSeptember 9th, 2012 at 07:09pm -
Both POV's would be awesome. I really hope her mother isn't setting a trap, but i have a high suspicion that it will be. Update soon :) <3September 4th, 2012 at 05:17pm
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I like both POV's. It's nice. I hope you feel better soon. I love this story. It just keeps getting better and better. :D Please, continue writing. I love it a lot. :DSeptember 4th, 2012 at 01:48am
Absolutly lovely!
Can't wait to read more, and I'm looking forward to the sequal!