Alive Till Kingdom Come. - Comments

Okay I just read the ending and I am completely mind blown. I love how everything fits so perfectly. The scene of with the rubble in the movie was abram! I'll always think that when I watch the hunger games. Lastly, I would just like to say, I'm sorry for obsessing over your story and spamming your comments. I just can't get over how amazing this is and I can't give it enough praise. Everyone should read this it's so good! Sorry.. I'm normal I promise. Oh and also, I like how Abram's weapon wasn't a bow and arrow, that would be really cliché... it seems like everyone who write hg fan fiction does that because of katniss.

WHY DID RUBY HAVE TO DIE ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME HERE

Oh my god. Why did you have to make Rosemary die. Officially hooked. I swear this is almost as good as the original. Did you get this from the scene in the movie when Ceaser is talking about the past games and he shows the one with the rubble? Also thanks for keeping me up reading till 2:00 AM when I have a french project tomorrow.

Incredibly written, I love how you put a twist on everything to make it so different

Okay I feel the urge to comment after almost every chapter I'm sorry, I held out to chapter 12 and then... okay so this story is really really amazing. I love how you still take things from the novel, such as the type of names and the personalities of the people in the different districts. Also this book flows really well and the characters are likable and easy to get into. Overall, you are a natural writer that I will definitely subscribe to so please keep writing don't lose that talent because you are really good!
Ps: Please don't be too freaked out about how obsessed I am with this story...I'm sorry haha I'll try and stop commenting.

oh and also I love the layout too, sorry forgot to mention. Maybe don't use a pic of Logan Lerman though because he is really well known and most people associate him with Percy Jackson

AHHHHHH Okay I usually HATE fan fiction. Espescially when it's written from books I love passionately (like the hunger games) but this was incredible. I love how you made this entirely your own and invented your own characters and your own games. Also you still wrote in a realistic way, still on the second chapter so I might post another comment after I read more of this amazing writing :) Only thing I could say is I could spot quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes, so maybe check over (or get someone to do it for you) your work a few more times.

This is so good!
Update? :)

Great writing! I love all of the characters, especially Ruby, I can't wait to see whether she'll chose him or her brother in the end. Rosemary sort of reminds me of Prim if she'd gone into the games. But I love how hes decided to protect her, I thought it was a nice surprise! You've approached the concept in an entirely unique way so wonderful job! :) Seriously can't wait to read more, subscribed and recommended!