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  • Lynnloveslamara

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    WOW.
    September 3rd, 2014 at 08:09am
  • freekydisaster_18

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    Hey, I'm here to share some great news! This story was added to the Slash category over on A Drop of Romeo! :)

    Here's the Review:

    "Helen thinks: You are all going to find this extremely strange but I have to admit that despite being the slash judge, I have a difficult relationship with femmeslash. I could not tell you a hundred per cent why I do but I just find it hard to read. However, I have to admit that this is not the case with ‘Soft’ by Disasterology.

    ‘Soft’ was created as the response to a challenge on mibba to introduce more femmeslash to the website and I believe this story delivered beautifully. ‘Soft’ is following the lead up to a sexual encounter between the narrator and her partner. Yes, you may think that means it’s going to be sleazy and a step away from porn but that is not the case, not a bit. Disasterology has managed to hit into every emotion that reminds people that the love shared between two people is a beautiful thing and it should be appreciated. The writing manages to enchant the reader into falling for the words, for the movements and yearn for the love that is obviously there.

    With beautiful prose that is dripping with emotion and two characters that we never really meet, ‘Soft’ is a one shot that you will be reading again and again."

    Keep writing,

    Helen xo
    February 21st, 2013 at 01:33am
  • Sassy_and_Scarred

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    This was really quite something. It's beautiful the way you described everything :] I am in love with this <3
    November 30th, 2012 at 02:09am
  • Max.Manson

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    This was so beautiful, I don't think I have ever read anything more beautiful before in my life. :3
    November 1st, 2012 at 06:17pm
  • V.Baby

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    Your such an amazing writer. You capture the emotion so well it's like you're practicably living it.
    September 27th, 2012 at 03:30pm
  • choliecole

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    This was really amazing. I'm not even really sure what to say, I love the detail and the way you can practically feel the love radiating from the computer screen as you read.
    September 27th, 2012 at 12:47pm
  • popsular

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    This story was truly amazing. I just absolutely adore the way you write, the way you describe things.

    I like how, this isn't just sex because it can be. This is sex because they love each other. There's so much love and passion in it.

    I really enjoyed it.

    I don't have any criticism because this is just perf, okay? :3

    (I'm very much so in love right now too, so the way they feel for each other, I kind of understand that right now. xD)
    September 23rd, 2012 at 07:06am
  • AdAyToReMeMbEr12

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    I really love this. The way you describe is mind blowing. Every detail. Every thought. I love it! Mr. Green
    August 5th, 2012 at 01:46am
  • FixTheBrokenPieces

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    This is beautiful. The layout captures the mood perfectly and the title fits the story like a glove. Your diction is phenomenal, the way you use such delicate words to describe the situation is amazing. I love the mood you portrayed in the story. Honestly, I don't even like femmeslash, but you've written a story in which that doesn't even matter because you're such a great writer. Keep up the lovely work!
    July 1st, 2012 at 07:00pm
  • Give me Therapy...

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    This is totally amazing, so well written. I can't wait for more, please update as soon as you can.
    June 29th, 2012 at 07:19pm
  • tumblingcactus

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    So beautiful
    June 25th, 2012 at 04:19pm
  • MRGF123

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    This was absolutely beautiful :')
    June 24th, 2012 at 07:33am
  • woe is chastity;

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    That was beautiful.
    Kind of reminded me of my first girl-to-girl.
    Very touching.
    I'm even crying now.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 08:31pm
  • n0rthlaner

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    This is the most amazing, flawless, & mind capturing story I have ever read in my entire life. It beats every story on Mibba, & certainly defeats my collection in the closet. This is beautiful & I cannot wait to read more from you. I am definitely subscribing, I don't know how you can't not love this story.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 06:33am