Tease - Comments

That last chapter was awesome! I absolutely fucking love Riley's character. And that sex scene was very interesting. Please update soon!

Such a great update! I love Riley's personality already and well I couldn't choose between Cayden and Ryder even if my life depended on it. I love em equally, they both have features that makes me like them more :D and that last chap was so damn hot! And how cute it was when Ryder stood up for Cayden and was being protective and stuff. Asdfghjk

I'm so glad comment swap sent me to this lovely little gem of a story.

I love everything about this story. The summary drew me in immediately. The whole plotline is enticing, original, and very interesting. I love the characters, especially Cayden and Lilly. I couldn't help but wanna kill Matt. You now have one new subscriber. Keep it up! -A

Awww I love this so much!
How 'ironic' when Ryder was thinking about what Caydenwas doing, he just got beaten up so bed and stuff :/ poor guy, hopefully matt's out of the picture now! Can't wait to see what u have in store for this story, great job:)

YAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!
Update soon?

I don't like Conner.
And I just want Cayden and Ryder together.
And that stupid Matt to LEAVE!!!! I'll punch him and show him what it's like to be abused.
I just hope that they break up soon so that C+R can be together.
Or that they just stop caring what Matt thinks and goes behind his back.
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

Boyfriend?! Seriously? Bleh. Poor Ryder.

what?!?! His boyfriend?
Break them up!!!
Impossible.
Crazy.
They are meant for eachother.

Yay~~ Another chapter! <3 Although... I was kinda expecting to see a boyfriend appear somewhere. ^^;;

^__~ Love the layout~ Lawlz~
Great chapter! I can't wait for them to get to know each other even BETTER, lol~

I love it!!
I didn't expect it so it was really good to me. I wish it would have been longer but I assume you have your reasons for short chapters!
UPDATE SOON!!! I hate waiting.

Ia comment because i love it and i wonder what will happen when they get drunk!!! : )

Yaaay~! You updated! <33

Again, love it~ <3

I love this but it is hard to read -_-

Okay, so I really love the story and the plotline so far, even though there's one chapter. I'm going to say this though (and please don't take offense): one, you don't always have to put "he said" or "I said" or "she said" after someone says something. Eventually, people get tired of reading that. And two, I saw you switched from past tense to present tense on a few things. Try to keep tenses continuous because it tends to confuse readers. I really don't mean to offend, so if I did, I'm really sorry! I'm just trying to give you advice. Other than that, love your writing.
~ Yuyu