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  • squidward tentacles.

    squidward tentacles. (255)

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    I like this, and the layout is really pretty; but I really recommend either making the font darker or aligning the text on the right, so it's all on the solid pink instead of over the roses; cause that makes it really hard to read.

    Otherwise, great start :)
    June 23rd, 2012 at 09:27am
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    I liked it a lot! Can't wait for the next chapter! :3
    June 23rd, 2012 at 07:49am
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