Wild Pitch - Comments

*Here From Comment Swap* I LOVED this story! I just finished and literally wanted to cry when I saw it hadn't been updating so long. I loved the characters Gray and Camden, and their strange but amazing relationship. I am about the least sporty person you will ever meet and this story still managed to not only keep me interested, but also left me wanting more. In a word, AMAZING! Geez, I usual try to give a piece of constructive criticism in my comments, but I can't find any possible way to improve this story. PLEASE UPDATE!!! It's gonna drive me crazy if I don't get to see how this ends!

Wow, the summary is much different then how I would have imagined the story to be. I really want to see more of the development of both the characters! Although reading from the comments it looks like it's been inactive? D: And gee, I just love Gray's name! Honestly, name matches personality. :)

Gee wiz! It breaks my heart this has gone untouched for so many months! You should most definitely pick it up and continue. Otherwise I might keel over and die. I finally find a decent sports story on here and it's been abandoned. =( Not okay. More more more! This really is amazing.

I found this really interesting. From the summary is was a different kind of story; a story about a woman just fixing men. I thought it was cute, then we got into the sports part and that is always fun. I'm a reader of hokey fan-fics, and even though I know nothing about baseball, I really liked this. The characters are developed well and I especially like Gray's attitude, as well as her name. Great work.

1. I really love the character. You didn't a nice job naming and developing them. I hope to see more growth in them later on.
2. Your layout irks me. It's very boring and I don't get a lot out of it. I feel the purpose of the layout is to give the reader an idea of what they're reading.
3. Not a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes.
Nice job! Keep up the good work!
Kristen :)

I really like this story so far:) For some reason, I really love the name Gray. I like both of the characters act and I think that the way they met was funny and different. I don't really like baseball, but I like reading this anyways. I'm excited to see how it progresses:) Keep it up!

I really like both of these characters, so far. I think it will be interesting to see how they interact and mesh together. They both have unique personalities, and seem like they could prove to be very memorable characters. I can't wait to see how you progress the plot!

I liked the beginning. His back story why he left home and then came back. I like the flow and how it moves. Your descriptions are amazing and paint a real and awesome visual. I like the beginning so far, keep up the great writing!