June 20th, 2008 at 02:29pm
Hey you guys!
I'm sorry I haven't been on in forever, my computer broke down but now it's alright.
Soooooo... I'm trying to think something up for a new chapter!
And I've missed you all so much! Love to all!
Because you love me and Crissy and love is in the air with us :3
Secondly, I must say I read your stories and you're writing is improving. You're getting quite good. Especially you L (is for Loser).
I think if you slowed down the plot just a little, stretch it out with dialouge and more descriptions, this story would be amazing. Also, do a quick run through of the chapters to catch all the grammar and spelling. Other than that, it's wonderful.