Season of Love - Comments

Soooo good!! Really hoping you get a chance to come back to this story and continue! It deserves the attention and your a really good writer

i love this! :D

Hey, I'm here through comment swap! This story is awesome, I like your writing skills. I found little grammar mistakes and I think the story is great. I may be a bit biased since I love 30 seconds to mars and I love Jared as an actor in general but oh well. Love the story, update soon and good luck with the rest of it! :)

Your writing skill is still amazing, but there is one error that I found when Mandy says "Why can't I be a strong young woman of the 21th century and look for the love of my life?" It should be 21st instead. A little heads up there.

Also I like to see how the dilemma of cooking something healthy for Jared would be solved since the mother seems to be in a habit and bad habits are hard to break. Maybe she will throw a fit? Or her mother would let Mandy cook her 'man' the food that he is comfortable with eating. I find that Jared may be a little disgusted with the way her parents live or he will be a complete sweetheart to them. Who knows how he will feel staying at a horse barn. Can't wait for the next one

Keep it. This is a great story and can't wait to see what else you come up with. It's a different story from the rest and every character that you created is so human and slightly cringing, her parents to be honest. But not every parent is healthy, fit, and rich. Some of them are just like them. Every one of them has flaws and I love it.

I am so excited about this! You are a very talented writer, and this story is just amazing. Please, keep it! I want more! Haha.

Keep it

Holy Fuck! A lot has shit happened in the last two chapters. i can't help but say that Mandy had it going for her, being with two people at once and ended up getting burned in the end. Two people ended up getting hurt and Jared was the only person that was left unscathed. It's interesting to see the female lead in such a turmoil of being so clueless about life and how important it is to become your own person and take care of yourself. She has Gabriel all this time and to have that stripped away just gave her a wake up call. Hopefully she learned her lesson...some reason I doubt she did. Can't wait for the next chapter

Love the new chapter :D she needs to be with j he's sweeter and loveable ;)

Also.. sorry about the three same comments.. If I knew how that happened I would tell you.

Hah wow this Mandy has a very interesting attitude.
I loved they way she thought, some people would convey it as somewhat bitchy, but I loved her character.
She felt real and had a reason to be pissed. I only read Dog and will read on later. But good work with that chapter!

Hah wow this Mandy has a very interesting attitude.
I loved they way she thought, some people would convey it as somewhat bitchy, but I loved her character.
She felt real and had a reason to be pissed. I only read Dog and will read on later. But good work with that chapter!

Hah wow this Mandy has a very interesting attitude.
I loved they way she thought, some people would convey it as somewhat bitchy, but I loved her character.
She felt real and had a reason to be pissed. I only read Dog and will read on later. But good work with that chapter!