The Howls of Love - Comments

@ DreamxWriter
hi hi i saw your comment a while ago and thank you for the information my grammar isnt the best but im trying! lol and i changed the background so let me know how that one is on the eyes i can change it if its still annoying to read it on it that way. and i will work on the third as soon as i have time i started school again so my brains a bit fried already lol well thank you for your comment and love your work :)

This seems like it'll be interesting. There's a few grammatical errors, particularly whenever you have double a's. One I remember was A Angel, it should be An Angel. An is used instead of A in front of words that start with A. The other complaint I have is the layout. The grey text is impossible to read because of the grey roses. I would change the colors to something completely not in the layout, search for a shade that matches, perhaps move the content to the right, something because it's impossible to read the grey. But I can't wait to read more *subscribed*