Nightmare - Comments

Update soon.

That dream she had was intense! I can't wait to read more next! Update soon!

Update soon!

I was sent here via comment swap.

I don't like the layout, it seems to confusing to my eyes, but then again, that's not very important. Your summary is rather intriguing, and the main character is called Victoria, which is clearly the best name ever ;)

When I started reading, I was slightly confuse.d I'm not sure how someone can LOOK like the type of person who speaks out. I do, however, like the idea that you have of Tori speaking to the reader, almost breaking down the fourth wall. It really interests me when I see that. The first chapter lacks a bit of description, I find it a bit bland in that sense. I also feel the need to point out that dialogue should take a new line when it is being written.

I'm not the biggest Avenged Sevenfold fan, so I wouldn't usually read something like this, but you're doing well, keep it up! :)

uhhhhh... somethings odd about Zacky.. more please I wanna know what's off about him!! xD

aww poor her, more please :)

That's not a lovely thing to learn, poor kid :( more soon?

Thank you so much for the new update! Update soon!

Update soon and I will love you forever! Thanks for the shout out!

Interesting idea. I'm curious how they found them.

this is amazing, more please :)

I love it! Update soon!