Forget the World - Comments

Hey, here as the new judge for the "Do Whatever You Want" contest!

This was quite sad. From the beginning I was getting the feeling that it wasn't going to be entirely happy and that maybe something had happened, and I was right. I could feel the emotion seeping out of each word that's written and the times when she was with Jimmy felt very bittersweet. You could just feel that there was something unspoken between them which weighed in each interaction, and it was such a heartbreaking truth to find out.

I really feel for Rae. A night that was supposed to be one of the happiest times of her life ends up tearing the man she loves away from her and ultimately destroys the life that she wanted. You really reinforce the desperation of Rae. She has Jimmy around and even when she realises that he's dead and what she sees isn't real, she clings to him and is doesn't matter whether he's real or not because he's there for her and she isn't ready to part with him. It's so sad.

I honestly can't find a fault with this piece. It's so ripe with emotion that it was as if I could feel what Rae was feeling, the loss, the desperation, the hollowness. This was so beautifully written

This is, by far, one of the best pieces I've read. You describe Rae so well, and the emotion...God. The emotion. Everything is so smooth, and it just tugs at my heart. I can't say much else, because your story is just amazing.

Thank you for entering

This is honestly one of the most superb pieces of fiction I've ever read.
The way you wrote Rae was spectacular.
And on top of that, being an avid Avenged fan, I can safely say that you know just how to tug at my heartstrings over missing Jimmy.
There isn't much else I can say because I am speechless by the utter talent you've displayed through this story.
I will definitely be checking out your work!
xx poison

I'm not going to lie, I shed a tear while reading this story. It's amazing and the fact that it's a Jimmy story hits me really hard, I just miss him so much. I agree with Snow.White.Queen, you are a brilliant author.

This is simply fantastic. I love reading Jimmy stories, and this one was particularly good. It almost made me cry though, I miss Jimmy. The layout is stunning, possibly not the easiest to read, the writing is a tad small, but the banner makes up for it. You have talent there. The plot line was almost cheesy, but in the best way imaginable! I loved this story so much, I really think you have an excellent shot in my contest. You're clearly a brilliant author.

This made me cry! It was so good! You did a fantastic job on it! Also, good job on the layout and banner.

Good luck in the contest :)