I love how this is working out. Matt and Tatiana are so adorable. OH MY GATES MATT AND OLD DUDE ARE FIGHTING?! Hope Matt wins and kick his ass. MWHUAUAUA (evil laugh).
You choice of words for this story is just perfect, is like if you change a comma it will not be as perfect as it is. Thanks for recommending me, it's the first time anyone ever did this. I'm so thankful and this one sweet chapter. Perfect. Can't wait for more.
oh dear looks like the shit storm of drama is happening
I love how they all went Ninja and Tati was the only one who didn't know Matt was coming back. And hey, who says super Ninja skills can't be on your resume. I wished I'd used them today when an annoying client of one of my colleagues came in, and coz he was on leave they foisted the idiot on me lol
Wow... This chapter 8 is genius. Matt is so adorable, she spent the night with him, brave not to do anything. I love the way you write, is so light and smooth. I'll always read this with the biggest grin on my face. :D Please update soon :D
Wow... This chapter 8 is genius. Matt is so adorable, she spent the night with him, brave not to do anything. I love the way you write, is so light and smooth. I'll always read this with the biggest grin on my face. :D Please update soon :D
oh my god this chapter was just so perfect - who would have thought that Matt could be that romantic to go and borrow a boat and take her on a cruise of the bay. Last guy that asked me out on a date decided it would be a good idea to take me to the greyhound races (I'd never seen so many bogans (australian rednecks) congregated in one place before lol). It was like a convention :p
awww that first kiss was just so perfect and I can just see Brian teasing the hell out of him for being so romantic
ooh they're sharing a bed and somehow I don't think he's going to be able to keep his hands to himsself
OH MY GATES... I'm in love with your story. Honestly, I'm thinking to ask you for an autograph... how do you write like that? How can make the story flow so smoothly. Most stories I've read are too fast with scene. You deff born with the LITERARY VEIN.. Congratz :D
OH MY GATES... I'm in love with your story. Honestly, I'm thinking to ask you for an autograph... how do you write like that? How can make the story flow so smoothly. Most stories I've read are too fast with scene. You deff born with the LITERARY VEIN.. Congratz :D
The true. You are a really really good writer. This chapter 7 it's genius and the story is well constructed. Honestly I subscribe and recommend this and deff gonna follow as much as I can. You describe the scene between Matt and Brian beautifully and their talk is so realistic and honestly, I've never seen such a well written story in Mibba. Glad is your first and I deff have a new favorite writer... you :D. Please update soon and you certainly will go far.
Chapter 4: Either I missed something in the earlier chapters or you did... Tatiana knows that Matt is in a band? I probably missed that part D; Other than that, the chapter was good.
Chapter 5: First thing that was comment worthy: Brian. He's so foul and I love it :'D Ah, his story got me laughing. Aw, I like where it is going with Tatiana and Matt. You did a good job, keep it up :-)
Hmmm... I can't say I love this. It's not bad, just not what I really like. I like your layout, though, but if I'd change anything, it'd be the chapter title box. Since it's kind of a reddish grey, it doesn't look like it goes with the red and black. I do really like the notched borders, though.
Comment swap :D I only read the first chapter and I don't really think I'll go on. First of all you give no clue in your description or anywhere else about who this fanfic actually is about, which made me unsure, whether to read it or not. second the first chapter is a bit oring, nothing against you but I just couldn't really get into it. I hope I could help you with improving, though :D and sorry if I sounded a bit harsh :/
I'm really enjoying this so far! It flows nicely and I end up reading it faster than I mean too (which is a good thing lol). Keep up your awesome updates!
Excellent update :-) I knew this was going to be a good story to read. I like that Tatiana isn't quick to jump into Matt's bed. It really shows something about the main female character when she's not easily swept off her feet, though Matt seemed to be trying hard to get her pants (dress?) off. :P I like how Tatiana is swooning a bit, though she's not exactly letting him see it. And ah, you have the same problem too? I get so excited when I come up with an idea that writing it actually overwhelms me! But you’re doing a wonderful job for being three chapters in :D
I won't lie. The first chapter was, well, boring. But aren't most? I wasn't going to read on but something about Tati's personality made me. This is excellent for being your first story! In a way Tati reminds me of the main character in my very first story. I really like this so far, and I'm anticipating your next chapter :-)