Umm.... three questions. Why did you choose to call the place they lived HeartBreak instead of something original? Why are your versions of Kyla and Robin dating? Does Kyla (Hanna) have a younger sister, like in Heatbreak Rd.?
Apart from that, it's really good, keep rolling out these chapters and I'll see what I can do for Heartbreak Rd. :)
I love it... just like I love everything you write. I think I have said that exact line on one of your other stories... that or I am repeating myself on multiple people here on mibba. (=
Anyways really good... and like I said on msn I subscribed..