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  • daughter

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    This drama is soooo good! I liked how there's turn after turn. I'd be petrified if there was a Snitch in my school. Good work, can't wait to read more. :)
    July 22nd, 2012 at 08:03am
  • Alynn May

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    This is so good!! I've really enjoyed it so far. It's just one thing after another, and somehow you've managed to make it all connect. I can't wait to see what happens next :) I want to know more about who the snitch actually is, and how he or she has obtained the information. Keep writing!
    July 20th, 2012 at 06:50am
  • kristenmichelle

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    First off, I really like how you made the title. It was very intriguing and made me want to read it. Second, I love the theme. It almost has a 3D feel to it. Your chapters get progressively better which is great! Keep up the good work!

    Kristen :)
    July 19th, 2012 at 05:39pm
  • slowburnbaby

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    This is an interesting topic to write on! I like how all the secrets are linked in a way. I definitely think Tara is Snitch. She plays the disinterested part way too hard. I noticed some grammatical errors, like possessives when they need to be plurals, but other than that, this is a good start to a story
    July 19th, 2012 at 04:03pm
  • tjenee26

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    Cnt wait to read more!!
    July 19th, 2012 at 02:09pm
  • Wonderlust

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    Two chapters in one day? Oh my! I love this story so much. Keep up the good work.
    July 17th, 2012 at 06:25am
  • Alsoldey

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    Just keeps on getting better and better. I will stick by this till the very end, darling!
    July 17th, 2012 at 05:50am
  • Wonderlust

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    I love this story, its kind of addicting already. I think Tiara might be snitch. Just a feeling...
    July 16th, 2012 at 09:01pm
  • Alsoldey

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    Alright, I love this and I cannot wait for you to update. Everything about this is so true, when a site like that comes up, everyone is going to have such a morbid curiosity to see what it has to say!

    This is very well written, and like I said, I am excited to read more =]

    Good luck!
    July 14th, 2012 at 08:42pm
  • Gjhgs

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    I love this! There was this person at my sister's school doing the same thing on face, I think her names as Jamie or something with a J. She did the same thing and spilled people's secrets.

    I was going to write a story about this, but I couldn't quite get it, but you have hit it! I love this! It reminds of pretty little liars mixed with gossip girl. Love it!
    July 13th, 2012 at 05:10am