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  • Ben Jolliffe

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    why did Oli not tell Josh? and aw Josh, dw, Oli's not straight, silly! :L x
    July 25th, 2012 at 10:44am
  • NervousHolyGhost

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    I'm curious on why Oli didn't say it was his and lied to Josh. There's nothing to be shameful about, Oliver! It's cute that they're hanging out though :)
    Can't wait until the next update :)
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:49am
  • Unexpected.

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    Liked it?
    Try loved!
    But I always love it :)
    And it is Oli's... Why would he lie? It's so sad. And he didn't meet her 'cause he's gay!
    So I always do this in a story, just 'cause, but I try to figure out who's the metaphorical 'girl' and the metaphorical 'boy' if that makes sense? Y'know, who's top and who's bottom. But so far I can't tell (which I love. I love love love having to keep guessing) but anyway so far I kinda think it's Josh but who knows.
    That was random... Oh well :)
    Update soon?
    July 25th, 2012 at 08:08am
  • Unexpected.

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    So it is Oli's. I'm assuming he hasn't come out yet, that's why he's so sad. He should just do it, y'know, fuck what people think. Then again I know how impossible that is.
    But now we've been left on another cliff hanger :(
    Lol. Have fun on vacation!
    July 20th, 2012 at 08:34pm
  • Unexpected.

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    I like this too! I enjoy your writing style.
    I love this pairing. Always sort of have.
    But it's Oli's journal, yeah? Sad :( Josh will help him though, I know it!
    Can't wait for the next update (:
    July 20th, 2012 at 06:31am
  • NervousHolyGhost

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    This is an awesome story. I really can't wait until the next chapter :)
    July 17th, 2012 at 11:53am
  • Ben Jolliffe

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    this is great :)
    July 15th, 2012 at 09:09pm
  • Rhysie Lewis

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    Omfg. I love this so much.
    July 15th, 2012 at 02:45pm
  • katie13

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    Hey, I've noticed a lot of phrasing mistakes in the second chapter, and also the use of American language when this story is based in England. You could really do with a British beta, just to correct all the little colloquial mistakes. But I really like this story overall. :)
    July 11th, 2012 at 04:17pm
  • factory girl

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    oh shit its a josh and oli story that excites me. i cant wait to see where you take this. i like the way you describe things and the amount of detail that you use. im excited to see where this goes so im going to subscribe, good luck with it :)
    July 11th, 2012 at 08:47am
  • JustBelieve

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    Yay, you updated :D
    I wonder why 'the book' is so important?
    Please update soon.
    July 10th, 2012 at 10:15pm
  • JustBelieve

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    I'm excited for this too :D
    I love You Me At Six and this story is really good. I am desperate to find out what happens next.
    More soon please :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 05:57pm
  • katie13

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    Hey, I'm from comment swap :) Didn't expect this to be a ymas fanfic! I really like where you're going with this, you have a really nice style that's easy to follow and doesn't leave you bored. Keep up the good work, I'll be following this story :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • katie13

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    Hey, I'm from comment swap :) Didn't expect this to be a ymas fanfic! I really like where you're going with this, you have a really nice style that's easy to follow and doesn't leave you bored. Keep up the good work, I'll be following this story :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • Nathan Sykes.

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    I was more than pleasantly surprised when I read and found this to be a You Me At Six fan fiction. They're my absolute favorite band! I'm terribly in love with Dan Flint. But moving on, there were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes. But nothing that can't be fixed, right? I'm curious to see where you take this story. Good job doll. :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 05:34pm
  • SlytherinCodyCarson

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    This is already really great! More please
    June 29th, 2012 at 10:09am