I'm curious on why Oli didn't say it was his and lied to Josh. There's nothing to be shameful about, Oliver! It's cute that they're hanging out though :) Can't wait until the next update :)
Liked it? Try loved! But I always love it :) And it is Oli's... Why would he lie? It's so sad. And he didn't meet her 'cause he's gay! So I always do this in a story, just 'cause, but I try to figure out who's the metaphorical 'girl' and the metaphorical 'boy' if that makes sense? Y'know, who's top and who's bottom. But so far I can't tell (which I love. I love love love having to keep guessing) but anyway so far I kinda think it's Josh but who knows. That was random... Oh well :) Update soon?
So it is Oli's. I'm assuming he hasn't come out yet, that's why he's so sad. He should just do it, y'know, fuck what people think. Then again I know how impossible that is. But now we've been left on another cliff hanger :( Lol. Have fun on vacation!
I like this too! I enjoy your writing style. I love this pairing. Always sort of have. But it's Oli's journal, yeah? Sad :( Josh will help him though, I know it! Can't wait for the next update (:
Hey, I've noticed a lot of phrasing mistakes in the second chapter, and also the use of American language when this story is based in England. You could really do with a British beta, just to correct all the little colloquial mistakes. But I really like this story overall. :)
oh shit its a josh and oli story that excites me. i cant wait to see where you take this. i like the way you describe things and the amount of detail that you use. im excited to see where this goes so im going to subscribe, good luck with it :)
Hey, I'm from comment swap :) Didn't expect this to be a ymas fanfic! I really like where you're going with this, you have a really nice style that's easy to follow and doesn't leave you bored. Keep up the good work, I'll be following this story :)
Hey, I'm from comment swap :) Didn't expect this to be a ymas fanfic! I really like where you're going with this, you have a really nice style that's easy to follow and doesn't leave you bored. Keep up the good work, I'll be following this story :)
I was more than pleasantly surprised when I read and found this to be a You Me At Six fan fiction. They're my absolute favorite band! I'm terribly in love with Dan Flint. But moving on, there were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes. But nothing that can't be fixed, right? I'm curious to see where you take this story. Good job doll. :)