Wander Boy - Comments

i sympathise so much with this story! i changed schools this year, and i don't have many friends in there.. not as much as i would like... and this is just so beautifully tragic.. but in the good way.. i really hope Iliana can get past this loneliness with Layne, they are so cute! hope you come back soon! xx

It was really good, for sure different. At first I honestly was not sure how much I liked it but after I got used to how you were writing it I really liked it. Both characters tug at my heart, which is really great writing normally I find characters like that whiny. It was really great!

Okay, Chapter 3 almost made me cry. It was so chilling and heartbreaking! I'm loving this story so far!

This story is beautiful. It gives me the same feeling I had when i was reading the Harry Potter books.
It's that good.
Keep up the good work!

This story is beautiful in every sense of the word. I absolutely love it. Definitely keep it going :))

Absolutely amazing!
So worth the wait; I totally loved it!!

AHHHHH THEY'RE SO CUTE
WHAT EVEN
I CAN'T.
this is beautiful. and sweet.

OH MY GOD THIS IS ASJDHKFHLKJASHDKHRWEFASCSDGAD.

This chapter was so descriptive. I loved it so much.
I'm curious to know his answers! (:

HOW CAN I NOT LOVE YOU?
WHY IS LAYNE STILL THERE I THOUGHT HE'D WAKE UP SOMEWHERE ELSE OMG IS SHE MAGICAL?
-spasms end-

It was really good, for sure different. At first I honestly was not sure how much I liked it but after I got used to how you were writing it I really liked it. Both characters tug at my heart, which is really great writing normally I find characters like that whiny. It was really great hun.

OOH I REALLY LIKE THEM NAMES.
THEY BE ATTRACTIVE~~
please update soon! (:

Aah omg the names I chose! :D Great chapter, as always!

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS PERFECT BUT SERIOUSLY?!
CLIFFHANGER.
REALLY?! D:
please update soon! (:

YOU HAD TO STOP IT THERE, OMG. I want to hate you, but I love you too much for this story. I love where you ended this chapter. Please update?

I have never read anything like this before! I am in love with your attention to detail, and I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

the fact that he even wants to kill himself is so upsetting, and he's done it twice already? this story is so much deeper after this chapter, and I LOVE it. c:

nothing can solve my plight.
oh my god. that line. I'm in love.
please update soon!

The third chapter was just as beautiful as the two before it. The words were so elegantly flowing together that nothing seemed forced.

I feel terrible for the Wander Boy, BUT IT'S SO COOL CAUSE HE IS LIKE SOMETHING FREAKING AWESOME IMMORTAL GOD WHO CAN'T DIE NO MATTER HOW HARD HE TRIES. Yeah, that's pretty damn awesome.

I am especially looking forward to the next chapter about the girl. She intrigues me and I am dying to know more about her :) You guys have such a beautiful story going here.

The second chapter was just as brilliant and beautifully written as the first. I have already recommended and subbed to this story and I am so excited for this story. I hope an update is in the very near future. I love the characters already, despite how little has been actually written so far. This is definitely a work of art :)

After readingthe first chapter, I am hooked. It reminds me a bit of The Time Traveler's Wife, because he always disappears and reappears in a different time, but I suppose Wander Boy just ends up in a different place, not in a different time.

I love the detail in this chapter and how it didn't have a single line of dialogue. I am going to read the next chapter, anxious to see where this is heading :) Great job with the beginning! It was so beautifully written.

the layout already caught my attention, it's absolutely gorgeous. it kinda captures simplicity, and I like that.

the poem in the summary, based on the two chapters so far, really ties in well with what you have written.

as for the chapters: WOW. that's honestly all I have to say. wow. both of you guys write with so much description, and it's just beautiful.

subbed and recced, please update soon!