AWWW!! I love this chapter! I had to keep myself from crying during the brother sister moments though, they really made me think of what it is gonna be like when me and my brother finish growing up! But over all really good chapter and I can't wait until the next one.
Hmmm.... I don't know about the party but you do need to make something awkward, why? Cause someone is gonna make it that way! at my friends, all the guests had to drink out of a glow in the dark dick straw it was so stinking funny! But anyways... The past 2 chapters have benn cute and I just love them!
Dress 3, it gives her a unique look rather than a "princess kate" look if you get what i mean! Aw i cried sooo much at the dad's death and funeral chapters!! really well written cant wait for more!! xoxo