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  • heatherxo

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    Niall is like the cutest one. I love those braces. He's so adorable. Your story makes me just wanna hug him. :)))
    July 14th, 2012 at 04:14pm
  • colormethechaos123

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    :( poor sam hope she gets better! and im glad you don't do that anymore :D
    July 14th, 2012 at 06:04am
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    (Comment swap!)
    I'm not a One Direction fan, so I'm going to just judge your writing. I'm a big believer in layouts so you should definitely get one. It keeps people from getting distracted. To be honest, I read a lot of fan fiction and felt like this kind of blends with it. Try adding some melo-dramatic bits to make it stand out. Just my opinion.
    July 14th, 2012 at 03:40am
  • colormethechaos123

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    doo itttt omg zayn needs someone wish in real life it was me :| loll but yea update soon! :D
    July 14th, 2012 at 02:58am
  • SpencerG

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    I say go for it!!!
    July 13th, 2012 at 11:19pm
  • Rachlahh

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    Ahhhhhhh I love this!!!!!!!
    July 13th, 2012 at 08:00am
  • SpencerG

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    What the fuck?!?!?! You're hanging me off a cliff!!!!!!!!!!!!! :"""""""""""""""""""(
    July 13th, 2012 at 07:44am
  • QueenNialler

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    I love this story so much!
    July 13th, 2012 at 07:08am
  • savannah_marie

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    I'm going to guess what she is hiding!! If I get this wrong don't judge me!! ;)
    Does she cut herself?? Cause if it was anything else I don't think that they would point it out...
    July 13th, 2012 at 06:57am
  • mistery gurl

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    loving it :)
    July 13th, 2012 at 02:21am
  • K M C R

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    love this story!! i also like to new author! if u need any more authors just message me!
    July 12th, 2012 at 08:31am
  • de nouveaux mots

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    Okay, I'm only on chapter 7 right now, but oh my god I love your Louis. XD
    July 12th, 2012 at 08:29am
  • S a m .

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    I wouldn't mind being a co-writer for this great story :) Whoever you pick, if you do, update soon! :)
    July 12th, 2012 at 04:20am
  • ashleyliz_x

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    Harry and Taylor are so adorable! cannot wait for more! update soon please :)
    July 12th, 2012 at 03:54am
  • colormethechaos123

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    awww!!! can't wait for more!
    July 3rd, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • Chasing Cars

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    Hmh... I like. Write more:)
    July 3rd, 2012 at 07:16pm
  • gypsiescatchtears

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    love it<3
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • colormethechaos123

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    can't wait for more :D
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:18pm
  • colormethechaos123

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    YAY cute! update soon and i would gladly read those stories :D
    June 30th, 2012 at 12:41am
  • nikkachoo

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    SCANDALOUS! Haha. We need some Zayn action up in here! So far I ship Taylor and Niall though ;]
    June 28th, 2012 at 10:34am
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