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i adore this. update soon please?

I love this! update soon I'm dying here

Comment swap brought me here. I will admit I know nothing of One Direction other then my neices listen to them. The story is well written as far as spelling goes, there are a few grammar errors.

I don't want to offend, but I don't think the idea is all that original. I feel that I have read it a million times. Boy and girl meet online and fall in love/like instantly. I hope there is going to be plot twists along the way.

Okay, comment swap time.

I really like what you've done here. As far as originality comes, I honestly don't think it's all that...original. Boy meets girl online. Boy likes girl. Girl likes boy. Is there going to be an unexpected twist? I really hope so. I'm going to subscribe to find out. I don't like judging unfinished things. :)

There are quite a few mistakes, also. That usually makes readers lose interest, so you should probably fix those.

Oh, comment swap and it's unpredictable ways. I like One Direction, but I wouldn't choose to read a fanfic on my own. However, I like your story so far. It's cute and romantic, and that's always a good thing. There are a few places where there are grammar mistakes, like run-on sentences, but all you need to do is insert a few commas. Other than that, it's a sweet story. I love the title, too. It's so clever :) Now I have One Direction songs stuck in my head :P Nice story, though!

Good update!
Can't wait for more.
Please update soon! (:

OMG too cute!! please update again soon!!

This is so cute!
I can't wait for more, please update soon :D

This is just way to adorable Nila! I love it in fact I used Hannah as a character for a role play (Thanks for your permission) I love your layout Hazza is beautiful

Daww this is just the cutest little story ever!
But I feel bad for our poor Hannah boo :(
She seems so insecure about herself, which I guess is understandable given that she obviously has a past.
But I so hope that we get to find out soon what happened to the poo darling.
And I so hope that Harry can continue to save her.
Oh gosh, I hope that he can.
I'm gonna subscribe to this because you've got me hooked :)
So please update soon so that I don't die haha.
Wishing you all the best,
-Meghan <3

Aw, I love this! Hope you update soon :)

I really like this so far!
I can't wait for more!
Please update soon <3

I really like the start of this! :) Update soon!